Daily Deviation
Given 2010-08-05
Animated firefly by *
DianePhotos. The suggester says,
"I'm really fascinated by this work - it's quite simple, yet it seems amazingly surreal. It tells a story, - I can easily imagine the scene as one of the esential scenes in a fairytale, but it's very inspiring, too." Also suggested by
ig0706. (
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`BurgerBunny )
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Yet the staring of the rat is a tad bit awkward. He/she has no movement whatsoever, which makes it look as if its a purchased house decoration. The firefly just flails its wings in the exact same position over and over, which isn't terrible for a small animation like this one, but it could've had just a few more frames.
The only other thing I must add is, at one point, the wing flapping looks like you skipped a frame. I'm not smart enough to know the exact frame, but its not tbat big of a deal anyways. I guess I can say its when the wing is spread out, and not in front of the rat... Just watch closely and you should see the part I'm talking about
Nevertheless, I adore this animation! Keep it up!
I love how the light flicker's on and off it's eye's and nose, but you could have added a blinking action to the rat, because it look's like a zombie some how, but other than all that, I really do love this, it is one of the most inspirational pictures I've looked at.
This show's that rat's should be treated as any other house pet, because of all the trash they are treated like, they need more love and inspiration, I am a rat owner myself, and I say, "Great job, it show's that even rats can be wonderful."
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